Unbreakable Heart

by Infinite Value   Jan 12, 2011


Proudly you carry the unbreakable heart
You show no emotion your as steady as the waves of the ocean
You wake up each day with the same routine an guarantees
You believe life is easy an everyone else makes it difficult
You believe in no pain and all gain
Would you know what to do if all
believed in fell through
Your whole world was shattered in front of you
Would you stand there an stare with a look of despair or would you recover without a second to spare
Do you have the survival instincts that you need to get by
I'm not saying you don't who am I to judge
I'm Saying someone so far from there soul
In your chest where there should be a heart you have a gaping hole
Recognize before it's to late you and your soul need to relate
the look in your eyes as if it's a stranger when your all alone who is gonna be there to stop the danger
The pain is now hard to ignore your hurt runs out all over the floor
I tried to warn you
I begged an pleaded
you wouldn't listen
I see what's inside of you why couldn't you see the beautiful person you were meant to be
They offer to allow me to say a few words. All I can say is the unbreakable heart broke today, into a million pieces, each an every one of you are to blame for the death of this rare condition that is so common among us. Today we witness the end of a story that never began. A person that was born and never got a start is gone. Never to return just sit there staring at his casket crying. When you get home put the flowers on the dresser lay in bed read the eulogy over and over and let your anger fester. Tomorrow go back to living your pathetic lie while he finally gets to fly

*Tish*

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  • 12 years ago

    by Kylead

    So is this based on something that happened in your life? couldn't tell but either way it was a great poem 5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Infinite Value

      Thank you Kylead!!! I appreciate you commenting and rating. This is not necessarily how the event occurred in my life but an exaggerated version and how I felt in the moment. In my opinion this poem is about false confidence and though it doesn't lead to death literally I believe it leads to a lot of pain and self doubt. It would be interesting to know what it means to others.

  • 13 years ago

    by 1SuNshIn3

    It is such a great poem but you started cluttering the words! Ah I fell in love with it though mostly the beginning... thanks for sharing!

  • 13 years ago

    by Alexander

    Its a good poem, but when you write words like you. Don't put the letter u it can really take away from the poem. I found myself focusing less on the poem and more on all the U's. Don't shorten words, it takes away from the power and meaning of an otherwise great poem.

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