Comments : Unbreakable Heart

  • 13 years ago

    by Alexander

    Its a good poem, but when you write words like you. Don't put the letter u it can really take away from the poem. I found myself focusing less on the poem and more on all the U's. Don't shorten words, it takes away from the power and meaning of an otherwise great poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by 1SuNshIn3

    It is such a great poem but you started cluttering the words! Ah I fell in love with it though mostly the beginning... thanks for sharing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Kylead

    So is this based on something that happened in your life? couldn't tell but either way it was a great poem 5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Infinite Value

      Thank you Kylead!!! I appreciate you commenting and rating. This is not necessarily how the event occurred in my life but an exaggerated version and how I felt in the moment. In my opinion this poem is about false confidence and though it doesn't lead to death literally I believe it leads to a lot of pain and self doubt. It would be interesting to know what it means to others.