Comments : Wings (Haiku)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    First of all, welcome to the site. This Haiku is well done in that if the reader just closes their eyes, they can see that dragonfly and they are graceful creatures. A well done from me.

  • 13 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I love Haiku, I think you did a beautiful job here, nice work.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sourav

    Really good... wonderfully done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You nailed the format, very well done!

    I loved the imagery you presented the reader with:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by jarrod

    I like the topic. I have written on firefly's (Poem: Firefly) myself and find these two creatures magical. I would have loved some more lines. Good Work!

  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely Penned!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is simply outstanding!!!!!
    i love wings...and ths was just satisfying,,you have a promising talent

    5/5