What I liked about this poem was how you kept it real. I am sure this poem is very personal to you but you allowed the reader the chance to relate by being open with your feelings. I am sure many people who have had failed relationships will relate to this piece with ease. You sure pulled me in and this poem pulled at my heart.

Another thing I liked about this poem was how you ended it. It was clever to use the same stanza twice as it reinforced the emotion in the poem and reflected how the writer felt in the now knowing the relationship was over

5/5

This is absolutely stunning. I like the meaningful rhyme and you caught my eyes from the beginning until the end. I am glad to read and discover your poems. Very well done, kel.

Sometimes,some feelings just have to come out! Well done hun!