by Italian Stallion Jan 13, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Someday when the world's so blue, |
by Meme
You were up to the challenge man .. This is an amazing poem .. I love the sweet and tender picture that this poem reflects .. |
Beautifully expressed, I felt like when you said someday, when the world is blue, it could have been portrayed as loneliness or maybe even possibly...when the world is filled with longing, a longing for a promise kept. |
by Aure
Wow, I can't imagine how you did it. But you won that challenge all right. It really doesn't show that you had to use some of the words. They all seem very in place. |