Wow, I can't imagine how you did it. But you won that challenge all right. It really doesn't show that you had to use some of the words. They all seem very in place.

It's not one of your strongest or best poems, but given the circumstances still an excellent job.

Beautifully expressed, I felt like when you said someday, when the world is blue, it could have been portrayed as loneliness or maybe even possibly...when the world is filled with longing, a longing for a promise kept.

Wonderful words, phrases cherished and so united together. Good job in the challenge, God bless!
~MaryAnne

You were up to the challenge man .. This is an amazing poem .. I love the sweet and tender picture that this poem reflects ..