A Blank Page

by ladiiie   Jan 14, 2011


Staring at the blank page
Seeing nothing there
Nothing comes to mind
But your name

I write my name on the left corner
Then the date
And then I think
About your name

I beginning to write
And everything I write I delete
But one thing I cant erase
Is your name

And all I see,
Is a blank page
With my name in the corner
And your name stuck in my head

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I love this. The flow was wonderful. You wrote it beautifully. :) I've caught myself doing this exact same thing.
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Ankita Chobey

    A blank page..with multiple thoughts crossing and filling the page.. I can rightly feel what would have been running in your mind while starring that blank page...
    Good 1..

  • 13 years ago

    by kmx210

    Hmm, this is kind of sad. I cant help be remember how i couldnt get over my first love. you brought my back, i saw through your eyes,

    The only advice i will give is read over poem before you submit it. i found 2 misspelled words. other than that you evoke emotion in me that a real poem does. great job

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