Hmm, this is kind of sad. I cant help be remember how i couldnt get over my first love. you brought my back, i saw through your eyes,

The only advice i will give is read over poem before you submit it. i found 2 misspelled words. other than that you evoke emotion in me that a real poem does. great job

A blank page..with multiple thoughts crossing and filling the page.. I can rightly feel what would have been running in your mind while starring that blank page...
Good 1..

I love this. The flow was wonderful. You wrote it beautifully. :) I've caught myself doing this exact same thing.
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