Comments : Let the blood run red.

  • 13 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This sounds like a song.

    the first thing i noticed was that you use a lot of the same words. try expanding your vocabulary a bit. it makes the writing a lot better.

    i love how you have stanza repeat tho. great write. keep up the good work

    --ashley

  • 13 years ago

    by kmx210

    Thanks ill do exactly that

  • 13 years ago

    by HisBlueEyedAngel

    This poem was written well...I love it