Comments : I Wish I Was Your First

  • 13 years ago

    by Aure

    It starts of good, but after this it goes downhill:
    "but it doesn't change thing from the past tho
    I know it should stay there.... but
    I just can't get it outta my head "

    Given a bit of work on your last stanza's this poem has quite some potential.

  • 13 years ago

    by Katy

    Nice

  • 13 years ago

    by XxDaisyxX

    What???