My Fault

by Hollow Face   Jan 14, 2011


Blast the stereo high for
I don't want to hear the lies.

I'm so lost, deep in the dark.

Confusion loses me.
who should I believe?
who should I walk away from?

Again its my fault
again my heart shatters.

School is no escape
Enemies become friends,
friends become enemies
nothing make sense.

I feel so guilty
my fault again
my soul darkens.

I try to hide, I try to run
But I keep getting pulled in
Drama is everywhere
blood seeps to the floor
Its my fault, my fault

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Here are my suggestions:

    Sometimes if you separate the poem into stanzas the reader finds it more appealing. So I took the liberty of changing a few things to make it sound smoother and I hope i didn't change the meaning.

    Blast the stereo high for
    I don't want to hear the lies.

    I'm so lost, deep in the dark.

    Confusion loses me.
    who should I believe?
    who should I walk away from?

    Again its my fault
    again my heart shatters.

    School is no escape
    Enemies become friends,
    friends become enemies
    nothing make sense.

    I feel so guilty
    my fault again
    my soul darkens.

    I try to hide, I try to run
    But I keep getting pulled in
    Drama is everywhere
    blood seeps to the floor
    Its my fault, my fault

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