by Katy Jan 15, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Every day I wait to see |
Good flow of rhyme, I thought it could have been stronger imagery and emotion wise, I just would have liked to feel more depth. Otherwise, it was great to hear your thoughts and see this love unravel before my eyes. Simple title that told it all and where and who you wanted to end up with, no need for the actual word in the poem. |