Loved the poem, just a few grammar problems to help you with.

"And the way you use to..."
It should say "used to."

"though your so far..."
It should say "you're."

And "as I lye in my..."
It should say lie or lay. Depending on which one you want to use.

Fix those few little errors and it'd be perfecto!
5/5

Very Nicely Done!!!