This is a very emotional piece!

A very special poem filled with profound power, emotion and beauty which are continued throughout the end.

You know already how impressed I am with this piece of yours. *hugs*

I really enjoyed this, its clear that it was researched aswell as edited and perfected:) incredible:)

I love this Nor as you know, such a beautiful write. It just increases my love affair with Egypt.

Congrats on your win :)

Congrats! Well done again!

"Wow, I love this. I was thrown into the setting after rereading the first couple lines (because I was initially bewildered by the wording), and found myself gaping longingly into the story without realizing I was reading words on a computer screen. Beautiful write, I am impressed. Exotic, ethnic, and relatable. You have your own voice and an interesting way of expressing profundity. I would write more but I'm too blown away."

I copy pasted my comment on your poem from your contest, hope you don't mind.

This really is a wonderful poem. Easy on the eyes and definitely different ;)

*the contest

Well I think we're working on it right :D Long way to go however ...

Really a brilliantly written piece it would touch anyone ... and will sure be a bit more special to an Egyptian !

Way to go !