I loved your format, each word flowed with emotion. I think this is a great poem written with a lot of thought

Gosh I loved this, I know exactly what you're talking about. We do tend to hold onto things that will only cause us more pain, more discomfort, ect. for some odd reason that's just how it is, but the love we have for a person or thing we can't let go of it no matter how hard we try to. Loved your thoughts here, they were portrayed rather well.

I found this love poem to be a little different from the ones you normally find on this site and for that reason I loved it.

This was a mature write that really speaks to the reader

5/5