Sometimes people forget that we just wish to put our heart on a peice of paper. they get lost in technicallity. your words are simple and pure, the speak to the heart, one who frees up your soul and gives you breathing room you never knew you would have, beautiful and pure,
of course poetry is a never ending write to get better, this poem envoked a feeling of a released burden.

amazing job

It's a poem of beauty. That's all I can say .
awesome

I really enjoy reading this poem. You caught my attention from the beginning until the end. Very creative, keep it up, kel.

A beautiful poem. You can see where you came from and where you went to!

AMAZING! You sound really strong in your faith, and I love your use of metaphors. Great read 5/5

AMAZING! You sound really strong in your faith, and I love your use of metaphors. Great read 5/5

This is a sweet poem kris