Good poem. it really got me in the beginning bit sort of lost me toasted the end. but other then that it was really good 4/5

**I meant to say towards the end...

I enjoyed reading this poem all the way. Though i like these verses best:
"but I know the soul is still pure
and has the power to melt the stony cast
encasing the trapped heart, if it truly desires"
In the end all of it was touching, atleast to me. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!

Wow how is this not rated a five I love love loved it and everything was absolutely wonderful,true,heartfelt and very great :) :) 5/5