I love nature poems and you have done a wonderful job with this poem. There were parts that had great imagery and you can picture everything in ones head. The flow was good as well, giving one a quick read through of this scene. The only problem I have with it is that you didn't go on for maybe a second stanza! :D

In all though you did a good job and I liked the many different scenes you have painted for us with your words. Great job and keep writing.

Anthony
What a awesome piece. The imagery is wonderful. I felt like I was standing in the dark rain hidden from the world.
Excellent job!
Take care
Cindy

This is one very simple and yet so powerful poem. Great choice of words...spl the last line 'I am invisible'. This is breathtaking.

all the best and take care

I agree this was a magnificent poem. My favorite line and the most vivid to me was

"illuminating droplets of water like a galaxy of diamonds.

what visions this brought to mind.

Such a beautiful and serene read about nature! This poem is like a picture painted and framed..a beautiful write!