by Melpomene
Deana, |
First of all this piece melted my heart right away.. |
by Ingrid
In the days of old... |
by jarrod
I like the quality and topic alongside with the way the poem was formed/written. Good work. Should it maybe be "lies" or "lays" instead of lie? |
I think you did a great job with this poem you really created an atmosphere and I fell in love with each line you wrote. There was something sweet and gentle about this poem as a whole |
by Cindy
Deana |
In the days of old... |
I am glad that the one i read after a long time from you..is this one. This is really beautiful. Has lot of emotions, used perfectly. |
by david hollas
I loved this, especially the last line. Fantastic write. |
Never getting enough of this. |
by Paul Gondwe
Great imagery in this piece, brilliantly written. |
by Pain
Well done i cant wait to see more |