Comments : There once was a man..

  • 13 years ago

    by Gness

    Yes you have amazing story talent if you want to turn this into something better add a little description to what the man felt and not just what he did great job nonetheless

  • 13 years ago

    by Gness

    Yes you have amazing story talent if you want to turn this into something better add a little description to what the man felt and not just what he did great job nonetheless