by Chelsey          Jan 19, 2011
    
        category :
            Love, romance /
            lost love
            
    
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            It's been 3 years too long, I'm ending this curse | 
by jarrod
| I love how you keep emphasizing what this poem is really about at the most important point of every stanza. I imagine it wasn't the easiest trying to find the right words to say what you wanted. Especially when you were so limited in vocabulary. This poem has a good beat in my head. Would be fun to hear it sung. Great Work! | 
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            I think you did really well with this poem. I particularly liked the fouth stanza. | 
| Hahhaha naaah lmaaoooo... This is so mean in a. Funny way.. I picture you sitting on a judges seat! Hitting the wooden thing! Relation ship die! Hmmm gurl, way to go :D | 
| Love love love the fourth lines! I thought that this had great ryhme! |