Love love love the fourth lines! I thought that this had great ryhme!

Hahhaha naaah lmaaoooo... This is so mean in a. Funny way.. I picture you sitting on a judges seat! Hitting the wooden thing! Relation ship die! Hmmm gurl, way to go :D

I think you did really well with this poem. I particularly liked the fouth stanza.

5/5

I love how you keep emphasizing what this poem is really about at the most important point of every stanza. I imagine it wasn't the easiest trying to find the right words to say what you wanted. Especially when you were so limited in vocabulary. This poem has a good beat in my head. Would be fun to hear it sung. Great Work!