Not a bad poem really, lots of questions but they all connect in a way and aren't just placed haphazardly. There's definitely a need of answers here, lots on your mind perhaps. Lots of emotion.

As the lovely people above me said, this is charged with a lot of emotion and it seems to me that it was written in a time of distress. I've asked myself so many questions and I never really found the answers, but I hope you do. Another good piece by you. 5/5 = )

Danika
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So many questions to which answers are unknown but sometimes when we look deep inside..that person is just us. We ourselves are doing it..nicely done.

I feel as if anyone can relate with this because we all go through a stage in our lives where we don't know who is in control. I liked it, simple yet effective.

These are questions that scream from so many people around the world and its actuallty quite sad for me to read. Im a free spirited happy person and it makes me feel so gloomy knowing people hold these questions and dont enjoy life to the fullest :(

Looks like Britt and nano picked the poem apart, no critiquing here! Good job

I love this poem because I have asked myself most of these questions before about my own life. I am sure that other people feel the same as well

Sometimes we feel we're no in control of anything and sometimes it's us that is doing the damage

Great poem

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