Spare Me A Minute (Quatern)

by Meena Krish   Jan 20, 2011


Spare me a minute you will know
how strong and true my love does grow
thoughts of you wrap my mind and burns
you are the one who makes me yearn

Look how you set my nights aglow
spare me a minute you will know
my passion will not cease its fire
for my words have you to admire

You are treasured deep in my heart
no storm can scatter us apart
spare me a minute you will know
that my feelings are not a show

You hold loves' key to set us free
open the door and come to me
wishes and dreams they wait to flow
spare me a minute you will know

A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of
four quatrains. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two. Third line of stanza three and fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line and does not have to follow a
set rhyme.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Meena!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Such words to describe passion for a loved one are immeasurable. Touching, romantic, and admirable composition. I put it in my favorite's list.

  • 13 years ago

    by dOUxMist

    Beautiful...well written. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Meena
    This is such a awesome form to read. Your poem had a wonderful flow to it. Rolls so easy off the readers tongue.

    You hold loves' key to set us free
    open the door and come to me
    wishes and dreams they wait to flow
    spare me a minute you will know

    The entire poem is beautiful. I especially liked this stanza.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    Loved it! I thought it flowed beautifully. I loved the line that was repeated, such small words with such big meaning. Hope to read more from you. Great work. 5/5

    Svandyke