Well....
If my 'Stay Hydrated' is 'very Gloria Steinem'...
this one is, for sure, Very (early)
Allen Ginsberg..lol..
also..."fun" to read..both for its flow and interesting, in a 'beat' sorta way, for its messages.....'-)

ps:.."Passing bye"..should, perhaps, be..
passing by..?
and:...."intemperant" = intemperate..I think..