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by Decayed
The pace is just awesome! To correct the syllab. count, I suggest you change these verses to make them 5 syllab: ^^ (Unarmed I stand) --> (Unarmed I do stand) ^^ (To hold the breech) --> (Just to hold the breech) ^^ (But the freedom of speech) --> (But freedom of speech) ^^ (Innocent blood is spilled) --> (Faultless blood is spilled) ^^ (Until the echoes gone) --> ('Till the echo's gone) ----------- Please take these into consideration! The poem would be perfect :) GREAT JOB!
by deeplydesturbed
Well done on this. flows really well! Syllable count is spot on!