Comments : Legacy (Collaboration)

  • 13 years ago

    by Mo

    SHAZAAAAAM!!!! Holy cr@p... I feel like each word I read punched a hole straight into my heart! That was brilliant. Im going to go back and read it again...

    Sort of dark, yet positively anticipated... suppose that's perfectly life, isn't it?!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lu

    I must fully admit this collab turned out fabulous Miss Sibs. It was indeed a pleasure writing with you.
    Even as I read it over again and again ... I myself can't believe how delicate and smooth it flows.
    I must say our ink blended well .. lol

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Ohhh what a beautiful poem..this is what happens when two great minds get together:)

    This really read like it was written by one hand, so in tune you two have been writing this!

    What speaks to me most in this verse is the courage to face the world and to undergo all that life throws your way.

    And as the end draws near,
    last words fall silently still
    and the life that was, is no longer,
    there will remain the imprint
    of my words, stamped crisp into
    the pages of my book-
    memories
    thick with ink and
    all the world's shadows.

    ^^

    My favorite stanza..indeed we will never be forgotten, as long as loved ones carry our "book"with them.

    *clapping*

    Bravo ladies, you two have outdone yourself!

    5/5 Ingrid
    ps: I loved the picture too, so mysterieus.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Awesome job on the collab.....you really can't tell it was written by two people. It is so in tune. Wonderful imagery and word choices. It creates so many emotions in the reader as your words are read.
    Excellent job!
    Cindy