I figured people, especially Nano lol, would have a lot to change because some of the rhymes didnt really rhyme and and the whole poem was a bit cliche' but I happen to LOVE cliche because I'm a hopeless romantic and love poems like this :)
i'd say 4/5 doll! I enjoyed it!

I loved this too. We all feel like this at times. People hate to admit it, but when they are in love they are cheesy. It doesn't matter who you are. I didn't think any of it was cheesy, I thought it expressed true emotion and was awesome. Cause I too am a hopeless romantic. Great job! I know how you feel. lol. :)

Fabulous !!
amazing poem with so much love..

Sweet memories of love, I can't forget,
The morning sun lighting up my smile.
My smile won't fade as the sun will set,
True, deep love is longer than a mile.
^^

this was my favorite stanza..but I think I will rate this as 5/5..just take off the capitalization at the beginning of each single line.

Well done
and good luck..hope to see a new poem soon