"A green circle on her finger
her ring now tarnished"

^ loved the above lines

the poem as a whole was ok I felt a little more emotion could have gone into it though

4/5

This was powerful indeed...I truly enjoy your poetry..simple,true..sometimes complex but most importantly..they are so damn..relatable..oh my..how I relate to the things u write sometimes!!! *mwa

This is really simple but it works well, especially if you're not used to writing free-form stuff (it's harder than you'd think right?!)

The only thing I'd perhaps change is in the line

"soiled in fornication" where I'd make "in" to "with". Just a thought, otherwise, I like it =)

xXx

Chels I love how you just let this write flow. A very different style than your normal, I must say.

Sad and touching!

Love, love, love this write from you. It pulls every emotion that a woman experiences after infidelity. The flow is absolutely great. Awesome job.

Take Care,
Kay