Darling where do you get your rhyming skillz? Where can I get some..this has a flow so flawless it could be a song...

Amen girl. I can easily relate. I guess I was just really tied to your emotions so much in this poem that I loved it. Sure the poem has some faults, but I can relate so much that it doesn't even matter to me. This really tugged at me.

I reall like the flow. Each part was powerful. Also i seen strong emontions in thos poem. Great read/write
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I know of your frustration and wanting to help so badly. So many times I tried to get through to Emily like this.. Like Britt says, just let them know that you're there and hopefully they'll one day come to you. I wish I could help. This is a pretty strong piece and is charged with strong emotion. You are amazing with what you do. Every single one of your poems are so well written.

Danika
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I really love the way this was written and the words spoken. I feel the same. Somtimes you want to help someone but they won't let you, you want to be there for them but they deny it. It's hard watching someone hurt and feeling helpless. Great Poem
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Sadly so, we cannot save someone, they can only do that themselves, but I do understand what you are trying to say here. People can only be themselves, and it is up to us whether we are satisfied with what they are able to give...

Well written, rhymed well and evoked a lot of empathy in me, the reader:)

5/5 Ingrid