One day at a time!

by SantanaAkAMisLilOne   Jan 28, 2011


I never been in a relationship but I know break ups are hard so I wrote this poem
To tell all you women out there you'll be fine just take it one day at a time.

One day at a time!!!!!!

First day I cried I didn't eat nor did I sleep I didn't feel like moving,
my heart broke when I watched You leaving.

Second day still in bed with tissues all over the night stand
Got the phone off the receiver because everyone keeps calling
All I want to do is stay in the comforted of my pillows and blankets

Third day I start to feel angrier, sadness
And confusion so I grabbed one of my pillows
And screamed let out something I never did before.
And then the tears come flowing.

Fourth day I finally put the phone back
Thinking maybe you would of called say you
We're sorry and you still love me, So I put on the messages
there was one from you, but not what I wanted
To hear not what I was hoping for.

Fifth day I start to clean out your side
Of the closet my mind going in the past into happy
Memories of you and I use to have together has I
Put your things in that light brown box that has the words
U-haul in the front of it.

Sixth day I feel a little bit better now that I have
Not just the comforted of my pillows and blankets
But also from my lovely friends, yea they tell me to
Let you go to just forget about you that I need to move
On, They should know that it's very difficult to erase someone
Out of your life when you still love them so. But I just fake my smile
And say "I will who needs him any way."

Seventh day you came to pick up your stuff
You said the first words and ask "How are you?"
And I simply replied "Just taking one day at a time."

Thanks for reading please feel fee to leave a comment and
I will get back to you, and please if you like vote : ) thanks again

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  • 13 years ago

    by SantanaAkAMisLilOne

    Awww thanks Harry that means a lot and I will i need to set down and think of some more to write so that mean more r coming : )

  • 13 years ago

    by Harry Bryant

    Hey keep up the great writing, you are better than you think you are, many people read poems and never stop to comment, and by the way thank you for your comment on my poems. that being said let me again tell you how good you are, when you could answer öne day at a time"you said it all, none of us should ever say any thing but that when some one asks us how we are. there are many reasons for me telling you this, but the one thing I really want to say is, you opened your eyes to the secret of living.

  • 13 years ago

    by SantanaAkAMisLilOne

    Your welcome Svandyke : )

  • 13 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I loved the idea behind this, it has so much truth to it. The ending was amazing, very strong. The whole message of the poem just relieves me that we are never a lone. Thank you for your inspiring words. 5/5.

    Svandyke