A great poem with great descriptions. I loved how everything just fitted together so well you couldn't tell it was a collab

5/5

Ohhh what a beautiful poem..this is what happens when two great minds get together:)

This really read like it was written by one hand, so in tune you two have been writing this!

What speaks to me most in this verse is the courage to face the world and to undergo all that life throws your way.

And as the end draws near,
last words fall silently still
and the life that was, is no longer,
there will remain the imprint
of my words, stamped crisp into
the pages of my book-
memories
thick with ink and
all the world's shadows.

^^

My favorite stanza..indeed we will never be forgotten, as long as loved ones carry our "book"with them.

*clapping*

Bravo ladies, you two have outdone yourself!

5/5 Ingrid
ps: I loved the picture too, so mysterieus.

To drink
from the great fountain of life,
sweet for all its dusky
intoxication.

^^^ I really like how personified life was in this stanza! And that this so called "pool" was filled with intoxication...super interesting!

I'll turn my life over
like pages in a book
^ Good similie! I wish others would view loife like a book and when things get rough just turn the page...unfortunately not many people view it like that!

I thought this was a very inspirational write! Well done!

Awesome job on the collab Luanne.....you really can't tell it was written by two people. It is so in tune. Wonderful imagery and word choices. It creates so many emotions in the reader as yuor words are read.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

A wonderful job between you two, I am envious of the flow and cannot depict whom wrote what. Excellent job.

Take Care,
Kay

Amazing wording. I enjoyed this piece and also like the lay out. It really captures the reader as it pulled me in. Well done to both of you. A lovely write = )

Danika