Dreamworld

by The Queen   Jan 30, 2011


Life's grandest moments
through flowery fields
and unclimbable dreams

... we measured

Time passed us by
now, offended
by each gray strand

...w e reminisced

Picture perfect at Mount Kilimanjaro;
at the garden of midnight stars
as smoke rings filled the air

... we conquered

Dreams we do not know are dreams not wasted.
But dreams we shared are dreams foretoken
For, not and never, a sunrise could shut them

... to sleep

* Written for Danny's contest *

Copyright (C) 2011 by EvanescentMoon

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  • 13 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    You've rendered me speechless with this piece, absolutely beautiful. A breath of fresh air this was, much enjoyed :)
    Take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Beautifully written, you definitely take a lot away from this poem. Your words are powerful and the ending really caps it off wonderfully.

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very original style and thought provoking theme

  • 13 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Dreams we do not know are dreams not wasted.
    But dreams we shared are dreams foretoken

    ^

    Darling I'm blown away...hope all is well... Beautiful poem...made me all warm inside...great imagination...love:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Picture perfect at Mount Kilimanjaro;
    at the garden of midnight stars
    as smoke rings filled the air

    ^Love the imagery, great work, I enjoyed thoe whole piece.