Comments : Dreamworld

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful poem

    Life's grandest moments
    through flowery fields
    and unclimbable dreams

    Each stanza paints a beautiful image for the minds eyes. Where would we be without our dreams?
    Excellent job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Picture perfect at Mount Kilimanjaro;
    at the garden of midnight stars
    as smoke rings filled the air

    ^Love the imagery, great work, I enjoyed thoe whole piece.

  • 13 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Dreams we do not know are dreams not wasted.
    But dreams we shared are dreams foretoken

    ^

    Darling I'm blown away...hope all is well... Beautiful poem...made me all warm inside...great imagination...love:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very original style and thought provoking theme

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Beautifully written, you definitely take a lot away from this poem. Your words are powerful and the ending really caps it off wonderfully.

  • 13 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    You've rendered me speechless with this piece, absolutely beautiful. A breath of fresh air this was, much enjoyed :)
    Take care