"So because of this,I feel like my breathe
should be taken"
breathe---breath

"Iwould like it to reavel itself to some"
reavel---reveal

I like this piece mainly for its message.

"I wake in the morning and picture myself
dead
Its not what I want to happen cause I do
love myself"
Though your life does not seem to be perfect and you don't want it, you still accept it..

This is really inspiring..for me. I'm not that fond of the ending, but this is still a really good piece. 5/5 keep writing :)

-X

Lol...
thanks =]

why arent you fond of life if you dont mind me asking?