Great title, I am not sure it was ur intention to have the reader think back when they played hide and seek with a long time ago friend, but you certainly did that to me. Great memories and great poem.

I really like your unique style of writing. I like the feeling of this poem, sad yet filled with the truth. Sometimes we hide our deepest self and desire. I believe there is a part of us, that will only belongs to us, but exceptions are, when we found that one who truly deserve we will let them in. I like the double meaning of this poem. Sometimes even with eyes wide open, still there are things that even looking on became invisible. Very well done, kel.

I love free flow and this floed as freely as any poem I have read The wording leaves me with no doubt this was inspired by a real spiritual experience and I love it

I enjoy reading this one, i can feel your hopeful desire on something, the loneliness was well described in each stanzas.