A truely sad poem. One sided love is very difficult to overcome. You expressed so much emotion in only a few lines, loved the way you just let your feelings flow.

Aww no, this is so sad. I feel for you on this one as I can relate to this and know how painful the hurt is at the time and how long it can last.

I loved the writing and your wording, but I think it would read better if it was in lines or stanza's as it actually has a good flow to it.