Awww another smile winner. This love poem was expressed more, you let the reader feel what your feeling and realise what true love is.

Great job on this one. You write poems that I relate to so much. It is like you have been in my head and penned out my thoughts and feelings!

I liked this one for the flow and ryhme too and the fact it was actually like a song. You could add a chorus to this and it would be an amazing song.

I liked this one because you describe how you waited so long to find someone like this and how much they mean to you now that you have them. You also clearly show that you just can't imagine life without them. Great poem.