This piece begins dark and ends slightly happier, which is good. But the last little stanza leaves the reader on edge. A little cliff hanger I think it's called =]

My favourite lines were

"...the wind rushes and whispers caressing your soul...graceful doves soar and glide revealing the light behind the clouds
Giving you hope granting you a choice"

This was the cherry on the cake

Well done

A great piece liked the description here using words of nature ...a great job keep up 5/5