by Colm
You pack so much into short pieces, especially about the process of writing itself. This poem, like your others, is interesting and original in its own way. I was drawn in from the start when you set the tone with "I suppose I'm just an ink stain." I liked also how you used the one image of fire and used it as a simple and effective metaphor. You didnt try to over-complicate it, it was just about right. A good read as always, keep it up |
by Sunshine
This depressed me I don't know why, and it's just perfect from all side. |