Comments : Devils temptations

  • 13 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Very true, walk in your faith and never lose sight of that and the devil will not win. As for your poem, my personal opinion would be to capitalize God. I think this poem should be in the inspirational category, though we see the struggle of good and evil, the good prevails. Good Job on this poem.

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 13 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Wow! Very spiritual. You did a great job in writing this poem. This is... Divine :)
    Uhm, by any chance you're a Clapton fan? :D