by RedRose Feb 3, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
The air felt strange that night. Just before he wiped the blood from his knuckles he looked down at the beauty he had destroyed, and nothing more. The skies above broke and they punished the earth with rain and hail stones. Soon the floor was drenched and what was broken now rises in the flood, seen by those who care to look for only a moment and then it's gone forever. Swept away into the unseen. He raised his hands to the air and let the rain clean what was left. Crushing the imperfect droplets between his fingers, his eyes never straying from the gaze of ignorance. |
by Burning Angel
Wow.. this was amazing. I love it and the imagery you used easily sucked the reader into every word and paragraph. It was so easy to really get into the story and feel sorry for both the victim and the man. |
by Moonlit Candles
Wow this was a dark poem. Your creativity really brought the poem to life. Was definitely a sad story read here. But you did really well expressing the emotions. Nice write. :) |
by Rihanna
Amazing!!!! |