Rage Fuels the Fire

by Lioness   Feb 3, 2011


The sound of silence
Blindly deafening
Rage fuels the fire
And swallows me whole

Poison through my veins
By not any means of vice
Not one drug of choice
But the vein that is my poison

My mind is a weapon
My body is a killer
I struggle with tranquillity
So my body pulls the trigger

The rage becomes a flame
The flame becomes a fire
I fill up with emotions
Mostly hatred and desire

The sound of silence
Blindly deafening
Rage fuels the fire
And swallows me whole

~ Liz ~

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Damn, I can't vote because it is older lol.

    This is one of my fave's. It has the flow so fast that you can easily just keep reading it again and again. I loved the words Blindly deafening together, what a strong impact that has when reading. I also liked your choice to repeat the first stanza as your last. some people don't like repitition in poems but for me it is my favourite when it works well. And you make it work well.

    Excellent poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I have poems like this amazing job I loved it and greatly worded emotions overflow wow a wonderful poem :) 10/10
    U are now one of my favorites :)

  • 13 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    Liz, you did really well with this poem. I loved
    'My mind is a weapon
    My body is a killer'

    Soo true and yet it has so many meanings. Many people will be able to relate to this. Great job. 5/5

    Svandyke

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I loved this poem it was really strong and you allowed the reader to feel the emotions of the writer

    5/5

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