Excllent poem. I really liked the title too. I also liked how you used the word "Lioness" in your poem it shows how even the strong can fall and how deep courage can go

5/5

Certainly a touching, sad write for a lioness. For a lioness, there should never be any sadness, nor any regrets, for she is a breed that all mortals fear. Perhaps she lost her mate to another lioness. 5/5

Just a tiny suggestion on this line:

Tortured by the darkness of their souls

Is it supposed to be :
Tortured by the darkness of souls (or its soul).

This poem is very good :) also thank you for your comment i really appreciate it..