Varsha, I'll be very honest here & hope you will take this with positive attitude.
I liked your expression and could feel sadness but at the same time by writing this poem with short words you somehow made it appear like an sms.
You have the caliber of writing good poetry but for that you have to give respect to it first.
I believe this art as an way of releasing but with respect otherwise i would rather blog.
Take poetry seriously and i could assure you of surprising yourself soon.

all the best and take care

Hey.. thank you :) i definately did take it in the positive way.!! :) nice of you to drop a comment .. i just wrote down my feelings.. i know its not to great a poem ..!! i hope i di better.. cause im not to good at writing poems or expressing.! i tried my best. and will try harder :)