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by PinkyPrincess
Aww this is a very sad and heartfelt poem... I could relate to some parts and feel it... You've expressed yourself well. I do suggest you reread it and edit and correct some of the typos and grammar mistakes... It will make the poem much stronger... For example this: I never though we would grew apart from each other But it happened was meant to be this: "I never thought we would grow apart from each other But it happened" - Do you get what I mean? Great job though ! =D