Rain

by H. Elizabeth   Feb 4, 2011


Smell of Rain
Fresh on the pavement
Pouring steadily
From the Heavens
Puddles of water
Like mirrors
Reflecting your own face
Back at you
You watch your life go by
Only your life's reflection
You look up from the mirror of water
Jolting back to reality
It's still raining

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  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful piece with deep meaning. Loved it

  • 9 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Job!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You penned something so realistic in imagery. excellent

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    This tingles the senses in a great way..
    Nicely done, so bright, so deep, and an awesome flow! :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    I love the rain, the smell as it cleanses the earth. Looking into the puddles seeing your reflections as a breeze sends ripples distorting the image.
    Very cool write =)

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