Spooky. Well written :) and I like the low reference.

Very well written.

Modernised and I like the rhyming.

Good job

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Goodness.....very spoky indeed.....could use it when halloween is around tell it to the kids :P.....VERY well written:D good job:D

I love this poem! It has great rhyme, rhythn and a spell binding story that just captivated me completely ::) .. Wanting to now read more of your writes! . . Olwin.

WOOOOOOOOOOW!! seriously you have got some talent and really will go far with your writing!! this is honestly one of the best pooems I've read in ages :) i didn't come online for about two years (or something really crazy) and so to come on and see some excellent skills like this is really wonderful!!!!!!!!! yet again another brilliant job!! will definitely be reading more :)

Wow! I love, love, love this one!! It is so cool! Great job!!! I can't wait to go read more of your writing.

Very Creative

D: I Agree with Wingless Saviors Angel, it was spooky! She's making death threats over the telephone!!! -Giggling- I can see the resemblance, to Edgar Allen Poe. :) Nice work!!

Absolutely love your modern version of the Raven! I love this poem, you have a great writing talent!

Wow simply amazing it kept the reader wanting to know more and keep reading simply mind blowing