I loved the repetition, I loved the rhyme, I loved the theme, so overall I loved the poem! Great Job! |
by White Orchid
This poem was good. I liked that you described a girl who was broken but at the end of the experience she has found a strength she probably didn't even know she had. Loved it. Nice Write. :) |
by RynZelara
Nice, love the bittersweet feel. |