Forever a loner

by Yakari Gabriel   Feb 6, 2011


In her dreams she is a hermit
who lives in a remote part of town
where nature keeps her company
society can't bring her down

her reasons like rainbows in her heart
softly comfort her at night
for her thoughts wander far away
searching for what's right

her soul messed up like an old clock
more like a blouse you can't sew
for it's been through thick and thin
and of luck it's never knew

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one day she sat in a corner
feeling alone,feeling hollow
her heart broken to pieces
didn't know which to follow

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her deepest desires she told to the wind
she spoke of disappointment and regrets
how life is so unfair
what she wants she never gets

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one day she got tired
she left it all behind
loneliness she didn't fear
finally she'd be all right

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In reality she is a hermit
who lives in a remote part of town
where nature keeps her company
society can't bring her down

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  • 13 years ago

    by The Queen

    For its been through thick and thin
    and of luck it never knew
    ^ It's

    her deepest desires she told to the wind
    she spoke of dissapointment and regrets
    ^ disappointment

    one day she got tired
    she left it all behind
    lonliness she didn't fear
    finally she'd be allright
    ^ loneliness, all right (or alright, though I favor the first one)

    * Sorry I needed to point them out :)

    once upon a time,
    they left her alone feeling hollow
    her heart broken to pieces
    she didn't know which to follow
    ^ I didn't like the ryhme here, it seemed like forced.

    one day she got tired
    she left it all behind
    loneliness she didn't fear
    finally she'd be alright
    ^ I like the meaning behind these lines, though I know you can always pull powerful words than these.

    The reason why I am pointing these all out, is because I want to nominate this, only without those misspelled words.

    Impressive Dear Yaki!!

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